As Sharon is only in once during the week we needed to find a away in which Sharon could see the edit and give us feedback. To do this i had to export the video in quicktime and up load it to You Tube. I made the video private so only Sharon would be able to see the latest edit. This helped a lot because once we knew what was needed to change I could get straight onto the edit. Over all I had to do this three times and it was very helpful constructive feedback.
When receiving feedback from Sharon there was a recurring theme of what needed to be fixed and this was the sound. There was a few bits of footage that just needed trimmed a wee bit and tided up and we will have the image of the film completed. However an image isn't complete until the sound is completed and flows nicely with the images.
A few problems that Sharon had with the sound that it was to tweety, it worked the first time but after a few watches it was just to repetitive. This isn't just a film we want the viewer to watch once, we want them to question themselves and watch it again.
After we fix these changes we should have a film.